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Post by edwardbiteme on Nov 30, 2008 18:41:06 GMT -5
LOL.
what will ? me adding detail , or the dedication ? O.o LOL
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 2, 2008 20:13:13 GMT -5
UPDATE!! ------------ heey guys, awesome book cover, : ) well, im not explaining it , you'll get to see a tthe end of the book if its published, : ) theres a person sitting on the bench , we're ganna change it to a girl (Lucy) than, beside her will be a blurred vision of someone sitting there (mason) and someone also in a blurr running really fast past her (alex) : ) Bitey , : D
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Post by teamjacob on Dec 2, 2008 20:22:27 GMT -5
This idea was courtesy of me. Aren't I smart? Haha. It has a story behind it, but you'll probably have to read the book to find it out.
Jamie. <3
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 2, 2008 20:38:58 GMT -5
spoiler! lol, j/k, i practically raped her when she gave me the idea, LOL. j/k, but i gave her a big hug, and she's like , "ow, your squishing my boob!" LOLOLOLOL
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ambereyedbeauty
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Post by ambereyedbeauty on Dec 2, 2008 20:56:48 GMT -5
LOL! This is so funny reading all these posts!! Im like crackin up!! Especially the last few posts and the one that has to do with girl who is OBSESSED with Taylor. Hahahaha. Well i just wnated to say goodluck bitey!!!! But like do your homework first before you become like famous lol. I dont think you'll be able to go to college if you get it published before college! Hahahahaha. I can't wait to read your book!!! I hope to see it in stores.!!!!!
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 3, 2008 16:23:21 GMT -5
thaanks aber , : D and yeah , i got an awesome ideas , and yeah, lots of people on here crack me up too, hehehe. and, i don't plan on goin' to college , i want to be a writer. i might get a degree in english though , ;P
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 5, 2008 9:11:43 GMT -5
heey guys , i can't keep you out forever!!! So, here is a sneek peek I guess, : ) (Chapter Twenty Nine)
------------------- "Okay," he said, reaching into his pocket. "I got you something." "You did?" I started to tear up in the eyes. "Well, two things actually." He pulled out two boxes, one from each pocket. "First off, since every pretty lady needs one of these," he said, opening the first box. In the box sat the prettiest gold corsage I had ever seen in my life. The flower was a big open rose. "Want me to help you put it on?" He asked, pulling it out of the box. I couldn't say anything, I couldn't even if I wanted to. So, I just nodded my head. "It's beautiful," I pushed out, my voice sounded funny because I was trying not to cry. Alex smiled. "Want to know what's in the next box?" He asked. I nodded again. He opened the next box. In the box, layed a gold necklace. There was a small diamond hanging off of the gold chain. "It's beautiful Alex, thank you." I crushed him close to me, squeezinghim into the hardest hug I could possibly give. ----------------------------------
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 5, 2008 9:13:59 GMT -5
it needs some work, I notice I said "beautiful" too much, along with "he/she said" etc., but, like all of my work so far, it's unedited, so if you don't like it, I won't bother to post anymore sneek peeks!!
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Post by Cassandra Cullen on Dec 5, 2008 16:42:53 GMT -5
NO NO I LOVE IT !
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Post by Lo on Dec 5, 2008 16:44:19 GMT -5
Me too, I think it's good the way it is!
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Post by laurencullen on Dec 5, 2008 16:46:10 GMT -5
Dude, if I ever publish a book, I'm gonna be like, "This is to Taylor Lautner, he helped me get through some hard time. And for making my room gorgeous with his posters. And also to his hotness, and his Jacobness. And also his eyes, and laugh. This will also go to my mom and dad. And all my friends at http://www.atwilightlife.com" :] Macy. I absolutely LOVE you. You are HILARIOUS!!!!!! Lol.
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 5, 2008 16:51:11 GMT -5
lol, thnks guys, XD also, i finished my book, wanna know the last line ? it totally spoils EVERYTHING. lol
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Post by ilovejaspercullen on Dec 5, 2008 17:54:08 GMT -5
Dude, if I ever publish a book, I'm gonna be like, "This is to Taylor Lautner, he helped me get through some hard time. And for making my room gorgeous with his posters. And also to his hotness, and his Jacobness. And also his eyes, and laugh. This will also go to my mom and dad. And all my friends at http://www.atwilightlife.com" :] Macy. I absolutely LOVE you. You are HILARIOUS!!!!!! Lol. LOL, why thank you. I love you guys too. LOL. :]
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Post by edwardbiteme on Dec 5, 2008 17:55:18 GMT -5
i feel so, UNloved. lol
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Post by ilovejaspercullen on Dec 5, 2008 17:56:02 GMT -5
Aww Bitey! We love you too! LOL, :]
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